I could see this working very nicely as a background track to something, but standing alone feels like its only part done - too much base over top of the melody perhaps.
Life can be tough some weeks, thank goodness for music.
a background track for a movie, or for a lyrical thingy? thanks for the help.
Where would we be without music?
Not bad at all
The main melody sound feels a bit off, not sure exactly what it is, but your main chorus doesn't to fit quite right with the harmony. However, it might just be me.
I particularly like the part that starts 0:24. If you do ever update this song see if you can extend that bit. It comes back again later in the song which was nice.
Another thing I noticed - I really like that part around 1:25, but then you add all the fast notes that throw it off. It's a very nice melody without worrying about frills.
Overall I enjoyed it. The sound is crisp, it has a professional quality to it, and the chord progression is fun. Keep up the good work Falloffenix.
Undoubtedly the best non-lyrical song I've ever heard. What emotion stems from this song! Truly astounding. Thank-you for a little slice of life I'll never forget.
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